Anata wa nihonjin desu ka?
I generally like anime, magna and products from the far land of Japan. But somehow I doubt your a native japanese or maybe you but your not so good with animation. Either way, the flash was a great one.
One thing: Emotions while you speak. I don't know if you actually made all the voices, but I think you did, I noticed something like that in the credits. Anyways, the speeking was EMOTIONLESS! You basicaly bluntly spoke some japanese into the mic without even thinking about the emotions. Also you did some basic flaws in translaion, like "umm... I.." should be like "umm.... watachi..". I think it should have been "ano... kome...".
This flash gave me a feeling that you just learned some basic japanese language, like anime, want to be a anime maker maybe one day and decided to put together your skills in both the language and skill. A basic product with only a few flaws.
I could also be completely wrong. It's just my oppinion.
Peace! And happy new year! Make more too.